B117+Writing

7th Grade Writing Prompt- May 2, 2011

"The principal of your school has invited students to suggest improvements to the cafeteria food. Decide which changes you would suggest. Write a letter to the principal explaining why your suppgestions are the best for the school. Student A:  Ms. Negron my suggestion on better cafateria food is to get tony's for lunch. I want tony cuz tonys has the best pizza and grinders and wen people dont want tonys people can have subway or McDonalds or tacobell because its way better than all the crapy food we have here. tonys has pizza and grinders sudway got sandwiches, and all that stuff with the other places. but alot of the food here is really gross or looks really bad so we dont bother eatheing we know you guys try to make it healthy for us but can you at least make it taste and look better.
 * Note: The following was typed as it was written. Studnet names were omitted, but initials kept the same.**

Student B: I think that they should change the rules for the cafeteria. Like everyday there's differnet kinds of food. And there's different food in the lines. Raise your hand when you need to stand up. Also sit in your table, and in your assigned seat and not even people sitting in other tables. If you sit in other tables or seat then you need to get kicked out for like a day and for different things you get kicked out for the different type of days. If a teacher raise the hand then everybody had to. And there should be a garbage can for each end of the table. It it's to loud teacher had to raise the hand and the studetns have to be really quite. They have to stand up by table. And when there done then the other table has to go up.

Student C: Dear: Miss Negron

I want to change something that nobody likes and that is the uniform and the uniform makes me swer crazy and I think is because of the shirt.

Something else i want to change is one lunch And make it spageti and meat balls not fish its a good idea because I think nobody likes it well some kids do but alot dont.

The uniform and the fish are not good things for people sometimes I dont want to get out of bed because of the uniform fish is for see animals not for people well they are for people but I and other well How do I say this well fish suck its nice of you guys to feed us but when the last time I get fish I almost got sick.

Thing to change.

Part 2

Dear Ms. Negron

The other thing I'll like to change is every part of the school like make a dark side of the school and the other thing is one other food like I said its nice of you guys to feed us when we need it but the food is vegetable pizza that a other food and I change it to Dominos piza and the unifrom you guys should make it differerent shirts but the pants are ok.

Things to change.