Student+A+Writing+Sample+Related+to+Reading

Student A Writing related to assinged reading topic:

I will alter the perspective of a story, given the model of the Three Little Pigs, and create my own version of the story.

Language Objective: I will verbally identify whose perspective the story was written from, and identify one difference in perspective.

One friday night there were three girls at the mall there manses were D., L., and G. They were all having fun together as a group untill one of them brought up an old prodlem and the all got upset and went there seperat ways. So D. went to Claires. She quickly got comfortable in the store and quickly came the meanest stostest (snottiest) most man-looking insigaterish bully comes along. M. M. sayed eeeuuu look at P. girl! Witch really upseted D. so what she did was try to ignore her and kept on trying on earings but surley enough M. got the best of D and D went to go hit her but as D was adout to punch M. in her mouth M D. L. had beer in edlens she hadnt heard any of it since she was bouing nothing but trying on shoes clothes and listenig to music Nicki Mora of course. That's wen M. came over and she said, aye look at wack ass L. tryer to be cute" and L said "shut the @$*& up you peice of s+++ and from there there had been a really big argument and L. had hit M. and closed the eldens doors and said "ha ha ha ha ha your ass is locked out of" and that made M even made so she kicked open the door chased L and L ws going to punch her she at her in one bit like she was done to D. Meanwhile G ws in Sudway (she liked sudway) and she was trying to work he over thingy wile trying to make a smooly at the littel stand right ours side the doors and she was starting to worred and closed the doors she was making herself a sandwich wen M. walked by she had quickly ran to lock the doors. Thats M. said let me in before I whoop your ass. and G. said how can you whoop my ass wen im in here and your other there!
 * Note: The following was typed as it was written. Names were omitted, but initials kept the same.**

  Student B Writing related to assigned reading topic: I will create a nonfiction writing piece that conveys conflict and resolution. Language Objective: I will verbally identify any three words in my paper that need to be capitalized and why, as well as articulate another way the conflict could have been resolved. The day that t. annoyed me. One day a boy named T. was througing stuff at me I was so mad I could not contrll my anger so I was thinking of wat can ido to get back at him so I got up and smacked him for the first time I hit him omg I hit him I felt releast then he never ever left me along and now this is u Im like that so if you ask him hell say he hates me then I’ll smack him and this is how I acked on what a lonfe on Disney chanel. Thanks for meeting wit me 
 * Note: The following was typed as it was written. Names were omitted, but initials kept the same. **